I need a title
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Chap 1.
Crack.
The sound of a whip bounces off the wall mercilessly, an agonizing scream piercing the air right behind the noise.
A deep chuckle is heard, and a man appears from the shadows, his hair tumbling slightly over his shoulders as his hair color matches his eye color: black. It seems like this man holds power over whoever he’s torturing, and you can tell it’s true torture. The kind that you do not wish to experience; the kind where you wish death upon yourself.
“Do you want to tell me where it is, or do I have to continue? There’s other torture methods, you know.” His voice is deep, controlling, and powerful. Fearful.
The victim whimpers, obviously not enjoying the idea of getting tortured even more. “I swear, I – I don’t know where it is!”
A devilish grin breaks out on the torturer’s face. “I never said what it is.”
The victim’s eyes widen in fear, and they scream, scrambling to get as far as possible from this horrid man.
“Aw, where are you going? I’m not done with you yet.”
“I already told you everything that I know! Show mercy, you– you monster!”
A laugh comes from his chest, rumbling in his throat. “That’s funny. I’m the monster?” He leans in, his breath tickling the ear of the victim. “I didn’t murder my entire family. You did.”
The victim falls silent, the simple sentence obviously striking a nerve. “You’re not intimidating.”
A grin. “Oh, I’m not? That’s definitely not the message I wanted to portray in the first place, anyways. But that sounds like a fun title to have, to be honest. Let’s shift this topic back to you. How does it feel to be a murderer? Is it fun? Pleasing? Satisfying? Tell me all the details. All the gruesome facts of how you went out of your lovely way and just randomly decided to murder your entire family with no motive. It’s actually increasing my concern that the police haven’t found you yet. Do you think that’s concerning? I think that’s concerning. Am I talking too much for a kidnapper? Should I just go back to torturing you? What do you think I should do? I’m not exactly new to this whole kidnapping-slash-torturing thing, but I do go out of my way to, like, talk to my victims. Are you hungry? Tired? In pain? Well, of course you’re in pain. That’s stupid of me to ask–”
“What the hell is wrong with you? Do you think this is some kind of sick joke? Do you find this situation funny?” The victim shouts, his face flushing with anger. “This isn’t funny! Holding me captive, playing with my feelings; what are you, some sick kidnapper that finds pleasure in all this?”
The man frowns. “Well, if you put it that way, are you implying that I find pleasure in your pain? Satisfaction, perhaps?”
The victim remains quiet, not sure how much this man can take before he explodes and releases his anger once again on him.
“I’ll take your silence as a yes. And my response will also be yes. There’s something… fun in seeing all this unfold in front of me. It may just be me, but it’s kind of funny. Now, time to kill you.”
The sound of a knife slicing through flesh is heard before a loud thump.
“1 down, 6 to go.”Sorry if it's a bit... gruesome but I just randomly came up with this- Don't be afraid to tell me if it's good or bad but I actually need a title.. This is currently under untitled document lol
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THIS IS AWESOME! I REALLY LIKE THE WORD USAGE! i dont know what you should call it, but you should continue with it!
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@Strawberry interesting..